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In second place

In second hand

Secondary

Secondly

In the second place

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bad things

badly things

things which are not good

bad stuff

negative aspects

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I am going to tell...

Let´s discuss...

An important point to consider is...

I want to talk about...

correct

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people of a different place

people of different places

people from another countries

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people who live in a different location

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Well, normally is believed that...

Normally, people believe that...

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It is generally believed that

Well, normally it is believed that...

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Some studys checked that...

Some studys have proved that...

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Some studies checked that...

Some studies have shown that...

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It has not need to be an emotional activiti

It does not need to be an emotional activity

It has not needed to be an emotional activity

There is not necessary for it to be an emotional activity

It need not to be an emotional activity

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But it deppends on the person also.

Despite it also depends on the person

Although it also depends on the person

However it also deppends on the person

Althought it also depends on the person

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Another potencial advantage is...

Another potential advantage is...

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Other potencial advantage is...

Other potential advantage is...

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A lot of people, a lot of things, a lot of games, a lot of parents

A large number of...

Many of...

Lots of...

A large amount of...

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parents don´t want their childrens to...

parents do not want that their children to...

parents prefer their childrens not to...

parents do not want their sons to...

parents would rather their children did not...

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you are almost every day playing and you can´t stop

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you can´t stop because you´re playing almost every day

you play almost every day due to you can not stop

you play almost every day and you are not able to stop

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Teenagers only focus on spend a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus on spending a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus in having a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus in spending a pleasant time

Teenagers only focus on having a pleasant time

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they do not care about if it harmful to their health

they do not care if it is harmful to their health

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they don´t care if it´s harmful to their health

they do not care about if it is harmful to their healt

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Hellow, I am ___ and this is my essay

Hello, I am going to introduce my essay

Hi there, I am ___, welcome to my essay!

This is not how you start an essay

Hello, my name is ___ and this is my essay

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I spend the time that I can play playing FIFA

I spend a lot of time play the FIFA

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I spend all time that I can playing FIFA

The majority of my free time is spent playing FIFA

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