FIND THE MISTAKE: "It seemed that no sooner my head had hit the pillow than the buzzer went off and it was time to face another day
no sooner had my head hit the pillow
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FIND THE MISTAKEFIND THE MISTAKE:"After we crossed a few fields, there it finally was-the sea. Never I had before seen such a wonderful waterfront. And the sand on the beach was an incredible white colour."
Never before had I seen
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FIND THE MISTAKE: "Such its popularity was that it ran for more than 20 years, and it remains one of the most successful TV shows ever".
Such was its popularity that
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FIND THE MISTAKE: "Not until it was dark they did leave the house. As they wandered up the twisting path that led to the road, they saw something that made them stop dead in their tracks"
Not until it was dark did they leave the house
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FIND THE MISTAKE: "He had been completely in the dark. Only when he asked Katherine about it he realized that something was seriously amiss."
Only when he asked Katherine about it did he realize
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FIND THE MISTAKE: "There are many restrictions concerning reporting a court case. Not only television cameras are barred from court, but the media is also prohibited from audio recording or photographing any aspect of a trial."
Not only are television cameras barred from court
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FIND THE MISTAKE: " I little knew that this was just the tip of the iceberg and that the day was just about to get considerably worse."
Little did I know that this was
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FIND THE MISTAKE: "He was a private person and kept himself to himself. Only by playing the violin he could display his personality. The music he played showed the world who he really was."
Only by playing the violin could he
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "A small, eerie-looking cottage stood next to the lake". NEXT...
Next to the lake stood a small, eerie-looking cottage.
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "He ran out through the door, with an agitated and angry mob following behind." OUT...
Out through the door he ran, with an agitated and angry mob following behind
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "The summer days that lasted forever and went on never seeming to end are long gone." LONG...
Long gone are the summer days that lasted forever and went on never seeming to end
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "Jenny’s neighbour was perched on the edge of the bench with her head in her hands. " PERCHED...
Perched on the edge of the bench with her head in her hands, was Jenny’s neighbour
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "The uncertainty of never knowing what had happened was what she dreaded more than anything else." WHAT...
What she dreaded more than anything else was the uncertainty of never knowing what had happened.
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "There was a pile of unwashed clothes and an empty bag next to the bed." NEXT...
Next to the bed, (there) was a pile of unwashed clothes and an empty bag.
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "Alex came up with the idea first, not Oliver." IT...
It was Alex who came up with the idea first, not Oliver.
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REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "Though she was happy to help him, she did think he could at least give it a go himself first." HAPPY...
Happy though she was to help him, she did think he could at least give it a go himself first