FIND THE MISTAKE: "Not until it was dark they did leave the house. As they wandered up the twisting path that led to the road, they saw something that made them stop dead in their tracks"

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "He ran out through the door, with an agitated and angry mob following behind." OUT...

FIND THE MISTAKE: "He was a private person and kept himself to himself. Only by playing the violin he could display his personality. The music he played showed the world who he really was."

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "There was a pile of unwashed clothes and an empty bag next to the bed." NEXT...

FIND THE MISTAKE: "Such its popularity was that it ran for more than 20 years, and it remains one of the most successful TV shows ever".

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "A small, eerie-looking cottage stood next to the lake". NEXT...

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "The uncertainty of never knowing what had happened was what she dreaded more than anything else." WHAT...

FIND THE MISTAKE: "There are many restrictions concerning reporting a court case. Not only television cameras are barred from court, but the media is also prohibited from audio recording or photographing any aspect of a trial."

FIND THE MISTAKE: "It seemed that no sooner my head had hit the pillow than the buzzer went off and it was time to face another day

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "Alex came up with the idea first, not Oliver." IT...

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "The summer days that lasted forever and went on never seeming to end are long gone." LONG...

REWRITE IN A MORE LITERARY STYLE: "Jenny’s neighbour was perched on the edge of the bench with her head in her hands. " PERCHED...