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The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "damaged" in the sentence?
 
injured
 
illness
 
sadly
 
mournful
The writer has not made the best word choice in this sentence. Which word would be a better choice to replace "orderly" in the sentence?
 
tranquil
 
calmly
 
neutral
 
eventful
What would be an effective controlling idea to add at the end of this paragraph?
 
If you want to learn a new skill, take a risk and try it!
 
You can't do anything if you just sit quietly and read it.
 
Learning something new means you have to learn it.
 
You won't get anywhere if you don't try it yourself.
What is the most effective closing sentence for this paragraph?
 
Now I know learning karate takes practice and hard work.
 
Luckily, my karate teacher was patient and kind.
 
That karate class was actually a lot of fun.
 
All the other kids were much better than me.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
 
I walk my dog, feed him, and love him.
 
I walking my dog, feeding him, and loving him.
 
I walk my dog, feed him, and to love him.
 
I walk my dog while feeding him and love him.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
 
She likes drawing, singing, and dancing.
 
Drawing, singing; she likes to dance
 
She likes drawing, to sing, and dancing.
 
She likes to draw and singing with dancing.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
 
If you need help revising this sentence, you should ask.
 
If you need help with this sentence, ask for help.
 
Ask for help if you need help revising this sentence.
 
Revising this sentence needs help, so ask for it.
What is the most effective revision to make in this sentence?
 
The park was filled with the musical sound of birds singing.
 
The park was filled with the musical singing of song birds.
 
The park was filled with musical singing of birds singing.
 
The birds filled the park with sounds of singing and songs.
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
 
Change "he" to "Ollie"
 
Change "competition" to "game"
 
Change "boasted" to "bragged"
 
Change "Ollie's brother" to "Him"
The meaning of this sentence is unclear. Which word should be changed to improve the clarity of the sentence?
 
Change "they" to "the team"
 
Change "the game" to "it"
 
Change "disappointed" to "saddened"
 
Change "canceled" to "ended"
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
 
Consequently
 
Because
 
For instance
 
At the same time
Which word should be added to improve the transition between these two sentences?
 
In addition
 
For example
 
Consequently
 
As a result
The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
 
Sentence 4
 
Sentence 2
 
Sentence 3
 
Sentence 5
The writer has included an extraneous sentence in this paragraph. Which sentence should be deleted?
 
Sentence 5
 
Sentence 3
 
Sentence 4
 
Sentence 2