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When I was in Da Nang in July their are many fun things to do. (3)

When I was in Da Nang in July, THERE WERE many fun things to do. (3)

Vietnam has many wonderful place to visit. For example you could visit Ninh Binh or Ha Long bay. (2)

Vietnam has many wonderful PLACES to visit. For example, you could visit Ninh Binh or Ha Long bay.

Hoi An has a lot of beautiful hotels and a nice beach but I like the markets at there the most. (2)

Hoi An has a lot of beautiful hotels and a nice beach, but I like the markets there the most.

You should go to Hoi An, this city really beautiful. (1)

You should go to Hoi An, this city IS really beautiful.

You want to be very careful or you want to fall into the water. (1)

You want to be very careful or you MIGHT/COULD fall into the water.

You should go to Ninh Binh! The scenery there very impressive. (1)

You should go to Ninh Binh! The scenery there IS very impressive.

The market is full packed with delicious food. (1)

The market is PACKED FULL with delicious food.

Their is a lot of stalls in this market. (2)

THERE ARE a lot of stalls in this market.

Its a huge market with a variety of stuff locate in Hanoi. (2)

IT'S a huge market with a variety of stuff LOCATED in Hanoi.

You have too buy the strawberry in Da Lat, their delicious! (3)

You have TO buy the STRAWBERRIES in Da Lat, THEY'RE delicious!

He went to the store, but can't buy the game he wanted. (1)

He went to the store, but COULDN'T buy the game he wanted.

I didn't like it at first but after a while I realized I wrong. (2-3)

I didn't like it at first, but after a while, I realized I WAS wrong.

You can take many photos about interesting sights. (1)

You can take many photos OF interesting sights.

When we went to Da Nang, my brother bought some souvenirs really good food and a hat. (3)

When we went to Da Nang, my brother bought some souvenirs, really good food, and a hat. (3)

Im not very hungry. (1)

I'M not very hungry.

You should go too the market, because the vendors are very nice their. (2)

You should go TO the market, because the vendors are very nice THERE.

When your in Da Lat, make sure too bring a jacket. (2)

When YOU'RE in Da Lat, make sure TO bring a jacket.

I heard that you're having plan going to Vietnam. (1)

I heard that you're PLANNING ON going to Vietnam.

There are many tasty street food. (1)

There is A LOT OF tasty street food.

There are games that people very like to play. (1)

There are games that people REALLY like to play.

There are people sail in big boats. (1)

There are people WHO sail in big boats.

If you think lanterns in Hoi An is rare, you wrong. (2)

If you think lanterns in Hoi An ARE rare, you ARE wrong.

It is the perfect choice for someone love history. (2)

It is the perfect choice for someone WHO LOVES history.

It has a lot of stalls with many variety of products. (1)

It has a lot of stalls with many VARIETIES of products. (OR) It has a lot of stalls with a LARGE VARIETY of products.