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There is considerably more to academic research than looking up facts on the internet.
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All things considered, I believe that English is far easier to learn than German.
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When there is so much sickening poverty in the world, it's incredibly unfair that some people live in luxury.
Inappropriate. Too emotional (sickening poverty) too informalย (super angry)
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In general, therefore, we can conclude that, on the whole, television has usually has an overall positive impact.
Inappropriate. Too many irrelevantย phrases and commas.
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banana
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rocket
Go to first place!
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fairy
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banana
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Can politicians be trusted? Or are they more interested in their own careers? Who can say?
Inappropriate. Don't ask questions.
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Unemployment is a difficult subject for me to write about as I have never been unemployed. Apart from when I was 18 and living with my parents.....
Inappropriate. Pointless personal information.
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trap
No points!
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rocket
Go to first place!
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shark
Other team loses 15 points!
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lifesaver
Give 20 points!
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thief
Give points!
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fairy
Take points!
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gift
Win 25 points!
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lifesaver
Give 20 points!
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I would love to study abroad, but unfortunately, the costs are too high for me.ย
Inappropriate. Too personal.ย
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To dismiss popular music as nothing more than light entertainment is to ignore the role it plays in millions of peoples' lives.
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I am going to explain my deep and personal thoughts on this topic and then I shall give you a conclusion.ย
Inappropriate styleย and irrelevant information.ย
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Many of my friends go to the gym or workout quite frequently.
Inappropriate. Too personal. refer to society, not your friends.
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It is absolutely crazy that governments can't solve even the tiniest of problems.
Inappropriate. 'crazy and tiniest' not formal language. Don't write 'can't' - no contractions.
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eraser
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magnet
Take 15 points!
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gift
Win 25 points!
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baam
Lose 25 points!
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Instead of using cars, it is much much better to use public transport such as buses, trams, trains, ferries, trolleybuses and so on.
Inappropriate. 'much much better' and 'so on' are not formal. The list is redundant information.ย
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