(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) The internet has converted the path knowledge is shared and consumed.
It is true
(Is there a mistake in this sentence) However, internet has caused problems that not occur before.
However, THE internet has caused problems that DID not occur before.
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) The two major problems in this situation are secured problems and internet addiction.
The two major problems in this situation are SECUITY ISSUES and internet addiction.
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) These problems are solved with legal action and collaboration between parents and schools.
These problems CAN/COULD BE solved BY legal action and collaboration between parents and schools.
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) The internet has altered the way knowledge is shared and absorbed.
It is true
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) However, the internet has also lead to issues that did not occur before.
It is true
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) There are some related to with this issue which are security problems and Internet addiction.
Two of the main problems can be identified as security issues and internet addiction.
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) These problems can be solued by legal action and collaboration between parents and schools.
These problems can be SOLVED by legal action and collaboration between parents and schools.
(Is there a mistake in this sentence?) Nowadays, using internet has increased a lot because of development of technology.
Nowadays, THE INTERNET USE has increased a lot because of THE development of technology.
