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In these days, people’s major aim is increasing their life quality.

These days, ...

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(2 mistakes) This brings about people gets bored.

POSSIBLE ANSWER: This causes people to get bored.

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(2 mistakes) All in all, not have enough time and lack of relationships are causes why couple deciding not to have children.

All in all, not having enough time and lack of relationships are causes why couple decide not to have children.

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Watching habits changed a lot to the past.

Watching habits changed a lot COMPARED to the past.

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In the beginning, content quality is important for audience.

To begin with, ...

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However, it matters which they read book because not every book improves vocabulary.

However, it matters which BOOK THEY READ because not every book improves vocabulary.

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Financial challenges of today’s life are causing young couples not to want children.

Financial challenges of today’s life CAUSE young couples not to want children.

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(2 mistakes) Every year students are tested in their own language. This test calls international tests.

Every year students are tested in their own language. These tests ARE CALLED international tests.

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Educational system must be reorganize.

Educational system must be reorganizeD.

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Especially two main reasons lead to this chooses.

Especially two main reasons lead to SUCH CHOICES.

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For example, people watch series with they eat some food because they haven’t time.

For example, people watch series AS they eat some food because they haven’t time.

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(2 mistakes) The basis of these difficulties is the expensive and long of quality education.

THESE DIFFICULTIES STEM FROM THE EXPENSE AND LENGTH OF QUALITY EDUCATION.

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Therefore, content creators start heading to the Internet for creating their contents. On the other hand, the Internet has advantages over TV.

Therefore, content creators start heading to the Internet for creating their contents. IN ADDITION, the Internet has advantages over TV.

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The reason is that people don’t enough time.

The reason is that people don’t HAVE enough time.

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In summarize, people are badly looking for ways to make money.

TO summarize, people are badly looking for ways to make money.

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(2 mistakes) People doesn’t understand to each other.

People DON'T understand each other.

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