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I love be her with my family no matter.

I love being here with my family no matter what.

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I love Vietnam is because there bb tea aka bubble tea.

I love Vietnam because of their bubble tea.

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I thought to myself why it was called Vietnam airlines?

I thought to myself why was it called Vietnam airlines?

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My last holiday was around July, where I went to Vietnam.

My last holiday was in July, when I went to Vietnam.

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Last July we have visited many tourist sites, like the Petronas Twin Towers.

Last July we visited many tourist sites, like the Petronas Twin Towers.

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After the week we travelled to Singapore.

At the end of the week we travelled to Singapore.

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We were in Malaysia only for 2 days.

We were in Malaysia for only 2 days.

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After some minutes, we have finally arrived.

After a few minutes, we finally arrived.

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Friends of mine said they don't have to be friendly.

Friends of mine said they might not be friendly.

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What am I saying all the time is that the future I can't change.

What I always say is that I can't change the future.

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If this will not work, I will like to work in our family business.

If this doesn't work, I want to work in our family business.

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I don't know if I am going to live next day.

I don't know if I am going to be alive tomorrow.

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If this will not work, I don't know what I do.

If this doesn't work, I don't know what I will do.

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There were a Caretta turtles.

There were Caretta turtles.

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We travelled to there by plane.

We travelled there by plane.

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My favourite celebration is Christmas because I got a presents.

My favourite celebration is Christmas because I get presents.

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