Share Capitals, Full Stops and Commas (Group 2)
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there was a large box on the doorstep decorated with a tag on it that read, “Happy Birthday! Open me!”
There was a large box on the doorstep decorated with a tag on it that read, “Happy Birthday! Open me!”
“What’s this?” now i was confused but excited
“What’s this?” Now I was confused, but excited.
the box wasn’t very heavy so i brought it inside
The box wasn’t very heavy, so I brought it inside.
my family crowded all around me
My family crowded all around me.
“What is it?” asked my grandma
“What is it?” asked my grandma.
“Open it!” My brother was impatient as usual. “Box, box!” yelled my little sister trying to get her hands on it
“Open it!” My brother was impatient, as usual. “Box, box!” yelled my little sister, trying to get her hands on it.
“Hold on, everybody,” i said i took a deep breath to calm myself down
“Hold on, everybody,” I said. I took a deep breath to calm myself down.
i put the box on the floor and kneeled over
I put the box on the floor and kneeled over it.
it looked like the box was empty except – except that it wasn’t
It looked like the box was empty. Except – except that it wasn’t.
there were a pair of big beautiful brown eyes staring back at me and a pair of floppy ears and a wagging tail that seemed like it would never stop
There were a pair of big, beautiful brown eyes staring back at me. And a pair of floppy ears. And a wagging tail that seemed like it would never stop.
my heart melted as i picked it up and cradled its warm wiggly body in my arms “A puppy,” i whispered
My heart melted as I picked it up and cradled its warm, wiggly body in my arms. “A puppy,” I whispered.
my eyes stung as i felt tiny pricks of happy tears gathering i couldn’t believe it i had been wanting a dog forever
My eyes stung as I felt tiny pricks of happy tears gathering. I couldn’t believe it. I had been wanting a dog forever.
as i cuddled the pup and it licked my nose i knew that no matter what anyone else says wishes sometimes do come true
As I cuddled the pup and it licked my nose, I knew that, no matter what anyone else says, wishes sometimes do come true.
