In conclusion I firmly believe that television should not become a commercial product merely to do more audience,
In conclusion I firmly believe that television should not become a commercial product merely to *gain a larger* audience,
As well as the television industry had to regenerate itself in order to be more suitable for the tastes of new generation
As well as *having* to regenerate itself in order to be more suitable for the tastes of new generation, *the television industry*...
Television is one of the most remarkable men's invention.
Television is one of the most remarkable* inventions of man(kind)*
Still today it is a powerful means of communication, especially for scientific pubblications.
Still today it is a powerful means of communication, especially for scientific publications.
Behalf people use television for distracting and relaxing too.
*Besides this,* people use television for distracting and relaxing too.
For instance when you expose yourself publically you have to face up your self confidence (2)
For instance when you expose yourself *publicly* you have to *build* up your selfconfidence
am I ready to ignore all comments people can do?
am I ready to ignore all comments people can *make*?
Whereas there are some people that are shy and for sure not ready to deal with wickedness and sometimes humiliation of being part of a program
*However* there are some people that are shy and for sure not ready to deal with wickedness and sometimes humiliation of being part of a program
what about make all these TV shows less rude and more educational without ruling out entertainment?
what about *making* all these TV shows less rude and more educational without ruling out entertainment?
During these years the role of television in our daily life had been rising.
During these years the role of television in our daily life *has* been rising.
Truthfully several artist were born thank to the big screen in talent programmes (2)
Truthfully several artist*s* were born thank*s* to the big screen in talent programmes
watching this kind of programmes is an alternative way in which you can spend a relaxing and chilling night. (2)
watching *these* kind of programmes is an alternative way in which you can spend a relaxing and *chilled out* night.
most of times it's very funny.
*most of the time* it's very funny
how much is important for you relaxing after an exhausting working day?
*how important is it* for you *to relax* after an exhausting working day?
It is precisely in this regard that is emerging the new issue of improving the quality of the entertainment.
It is precisely in this regard that * the new issue of improving the quality of the entertainment is emerging*
