"Oh, no!" I heard my mother scream when I woke up that morning. There was a stink of burnt eggs and bacon in the air. "I've burnt breakfast!" she yelled. I went into the kitchen and walked into a cloud of black smoke.
first person
5
Harry Potter is really the character you should be most impressed by. Not only does he overcome hardship - having to deal with two foster parents who clearly don't love him - he even has to find out what happened to his own dead father.
Seconde
10
He didn't know where to run, so he just hid behind a barrel. He could hear them looking for him, heard the men talking in angry voices. He was so scared he was afraid to breathe. "I heard him run around this way," said the big man.
Third Person Limited
15
Rainbow was a Yorkie and she got lost in the woods on Halloween. Becky, her owner, a twelve-year-old girl, searched the house, under her bed, the garage, but couldn't find her. Mrs. Thompson, her neighbor, helped look, too.
Third Person Objective
20
"Here's the deal," she said to me. "I'll let you come in from the cold if you show me how you shoot that bow and arrow." "This?" I said, holding it up. "It's easy. But it takes practice." "I have all the patience in the world," she said.
First Person
10
The girl was hungry. She could feel the aches in her belly, like some crab was in there. She had been on the road for two weeks and knew she had to find something to eat. She found a field and some apple trees. She ran for them.
Third Person Limited
15
You never start a sentence with a preposition, my teacher told me.
First Person
15
"I don't like it when he tells me what to do," she said. "But he's the teacher," Martin said to her. "You have to listen to him." "I don't have to listen to nobody!" she said.
Third Person Objective
20
First the dog came out of the house, wagging its tail. Then it was followed by Mr. Vandercamp, who walked backward holding a big cake. Mrs. Fields watched it happen: Mr. Vandercamp slipped and the cake fell.
Third Person Objective
15
After the fair ended, we ended up taking a stroll by the river. We hadn't been there in years and the images were comforting to me: a sail boat glided along the water, above it three birds darted through the clouds. Fishermen everywhere.
First Person
5
The Dursleys hadn’t even remembered that today happened to be Harry’s twelfth birthday. Of course, his hopes hadn’t been high; they’d never given him a real present, let alone a cake – but to ignore it completely…
Third Person Limited
25
Detective Garrard watched the man behind the counter serving a customer. His movements were quick, almost agitated. As he approached he saw the man’s eyes flick to his chest, as though looking for a telltale badge. Or was he imagining it?
Third Person Limited
20
It was almost December, and Jonas was beginning to be frightened. No. Wrong word, Jonas thought. Frightened meant that deep, sickening feeling of something terrible about to happen.
Third Person Lmited
15
When speaking in front of people, body language is very important. You should look people in the eyes, but not stare. You should not simply look down at your notes. You should also stand up straight, not slouch.
Second Person
5
But Ender knew, even as he thought it, that Peter wouldn't leave him alone. There was something in Peter's eyes, when he was in his mad mood, and whenever Ender saw that look, that glint, he knew that Peter would not leave him alone.
Third Person Limited
15
He thought that Sarah was fantastic, but she could not quite think the same of him.
