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I think we should have good manner in public places.
I think we should have good manners in public places.
They were so rudely.
They were so rude.
Two children were runing around.
Two children were running around.
We should disturb others.
We shouldn't disturb others.
This morning I quarrelled to my brother at school.
This morning I quarrelled with my brother at school.
I was happily when I played with her.
I was happy when I played with her.
I hope we won't be nice to each other.
I hope we will be nice to each other.
We did not talked to each other in the morning.
We did not talk to each other in the morning.
After school, we took the bus home together but we both sat quiet on the bus.
After school, we took the bus home together but we both sat quietly on the bus.
I am fat so I am going to do more sport every day.
I am fat so I am going to do more sports every day.
Peter made friends to Sam.
Peter made friends with Sam.
He was exciting when he won the game.
He was excited when he won the game.
Miss Lam always want us to work hard.
Miss Lam always wants us to work hard.
She is eating loudly.
She is eating noisily.
Dogs are our friends and we should be nice to it.
Dogs are our friends and we should be nice to them.
I quarreled with my mum last night.
I quarrelled with my mum last night.
