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Billy was waking in forest. (2)
Billy was walking in the forest.
First another geraffe his name is called Mr. Billy is his brother so they went on a walk and was surrounded by trees in africa. (4))
First, another giraffe named Billy who was his brother, and he went on a walk and were surrounded by trees in Africa.
next they whanted to clime one so his brother left to go home butt a sturdy tree is probibely it is thirteene miles away (6)
Next, they wanted to climb a tree but it was thirteen miles away.
So he trise hes best to run befor it is drak (5)
So he tries his best to run before it gets dark.
Then he find the tirtenen miles away tree and climes on it (5)
Then, he finds the tree that is thirteen miles away and climbs on it.
as the got it and it was befor night time. (4)
As he reached the top it was before nighttime.
