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Corrections October 2025 Mock

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Hello Eliza! // Sorry that I haven't answered earlier. I was busy doing homework.

1. Inappropriate greeting 2. There is no 'thank you' and/or expressing happiness at receiving the email.

Best wishes // Eliza.

Best wishes, // Eliza

Then, you asked what helps me to learn new language.

Then, you asked what helps me to learn a new language.

I would choose fantasy books because you can learn a lot from it.

I would choose fantasy books because you can learn a lot from them.

For learn English I use a workbook.

For learning (OR To learn) English I use a workbook.

I very like read books on English language. (4 mistakes)

I like reading books in the English language very much.

What works best for you when you learn a foreign language?

e.g. Watching videos works best for me. // I prefer ... .// ...

In your received email you asked me some questions.

In your email you asked me some questions.

I prefer reading fairy-tales on english, because it have easy and useful words.

I prefer reading fairy-tales in English, because they have easy and useful words.

I didn't answered for a long time.

I haven't answered for a long time.

I read fantasy books because it's easy for me to understand.

I read fantasy books because they're easy for me to understand.

I use internet to find rulers, words and grammers.

I use the Internet to find grammar rules and words.

I try to use new words in my pastime.

I try to use new words in my daily life(?). pastime= hobby

Reading books is best works for me.

Reading books works best for me.

Thank you for your resent email.

Thank you for your recent email.

I read a Harry Potter is my so love book.

I read Harry Potter books, they're my most favourites // favourite ones.