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As our technology developed through the years, people ...
has developed
Firstly, music connects us through music we can meet new people.
They will not feel as alone as they imagined they would be.
would
Music can play a crucial role in educating young people.
Ok
Going to concerts gives them the opportunity to encounter people they would not have otherwise met.
Ok
It is doubtful that music is an essential element of society.
Ok
There are a considerable amount of conflicts deteriorating society,
Not Ok
We are easily influentable by certain aspects of our lives.
influenced
