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When someone tells you what to not do, you will do it as an act of rebellion.

When someone tells you not to do something, you will do it as an act of rebellion.

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It was a day where my entire school was offline and our laptops were not working.

It was a day when my entire school was offline and our laptops were not working.

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The students don't know what are they studying.

The students do not know what they are studying.

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Although, this can be perjudicial for their studies,

However, this can be bad for / detrimental to their studies.

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The mobile phone it's a dangerous device if you don't know how to use it.

The mobile phone is a dangerous device if you do not know how to use it.

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I personally consider the use of mobile phones to be clue in today's learning.

I personally consider the use of mobile phones to be crucial / key in today's learning.

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If this problem is not solved earlier, our future would be worse than today.

If this problem is not solved soon, our future will be even worse than today.

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I get desconcentrated by looking at the screen.

I get distracted by looking at the screen.

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I'm disagree to this because we need our mobile phones to improve our notes.

I disagree with this because we need our mobile phones to improve our marks.

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In adition, I would like to resalt that many teenagers make mistakes when writing.

In addition, I would like to highlight that many teenagers make mistakes when writing.

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Despite that, I would argue that it is highly benefitial.

Despite that, I would argue that it is highly beneficial.

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The process of learning, specially in the earlier ages, has potential benefits for our mental health.

The process of learning, especially in the earlier ages, has potential benefits for our mental health.

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It should not be forgotten that is easier learning a language when you are little.

It should not be forgotten that it is easier to learn a language when you are little.

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It is very important to let a children learning a foreign language as soon as possible.

It is very important to let a child learn a foreign language as soon as possible.

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It is generally accepted that know more than one language is important.

It is generally accepted that knowing more than one language is important.

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Our brain is able to learn easier as young as it is.

Our brain is able to learn more easily when it is younger.

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