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The vast majority of respondents were in favour for moving away.
In favour of
The local council would like to know whether or not there is a tendency for young people to relocate.
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A great amount of respondents said that ...
number of
... the pursuit of better job opportunities.
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After having completed their education, many young people ...
Ok; after having done something = after they have done something
Moving away from home is not always possible, given the high expenditure that this implies.
Ok
There are two incentives that drive students to move to a new area.
Ok
I am writing to you in response to your request for comments.
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