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IELTS writing task 1 - error correction

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The graph shows information about how many people travelled the Philippines.

The graph shows information about how many people travelled TO the Philippines.

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... the Philippines was much popular than Thailand.

... the Philippines was much MORE popular than Thailand.

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... the number of travellers levelled off to around 4m in 2017

... the number of travellers levelled off AT around 4m in 2017

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There was an upward trend in number of travellers to Philippines.

There was an upward trend in THE number of travellers to THE Philippines.

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In, detail, the number of traveller to the Philippines started around 2 m in 2010.

In, detail, the number of travellerS to the Philippines started AT around 2 m in 2010.

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Finally, there was considerable increase ...

Finally, there was A considerable increase ...

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Then, there was gradually decrease ....

Then, there was A graduaL decrease ....

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... over a eight year period.

... over aN eight-year period.

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... and then the figure slightly decrease to 3.5 m in 2012.

1. ... and then, the figure decreaseD slightly to 3.5 m in 2012. 2. ... and then the figure SAW A slight decrease to 3.5 m in 2012.

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There was considerable drop to 1.2 m in 2018.

There was A considerable drop to 1.2 m in 2018.

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In detail, the numer of travellers to the Philippines was 2 millions in 2010, but in 2011 has increased slightly.

In detail, the numer of travellers to the Philippines was 2 MILLION in 2010, but in 2011 THE FIGURE INCREASED slightly TO ....

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