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The four siblings Lucy, peter and Susan went to meet Aslan.
The four siblings Lucy, Peter and Susan went to meet Aslan.
When she said I want to meet Aslan everyone gasped.
When she said "I want to meet Aslan" everyone gasped.
She is herbivore.
She is a hervivore.
As beutiful as a butterfly.
As beautiful as a butterfly.
It has laser eyes and it spit poison
It has laser eyes and it spits poison.
It half animal and it has no tail.
It's half animal and it has no tail.
The girl name is Leesa.
The girl's name is Leesa.
She is not old she is very young.
She is not old, she is very young.
She always eats meat but she is fit.
She always eats meat, but she is fit.
The camp has a army of animals.
The camp has an army of animals.
They told Aslan they need help because they were betrayed by the white witch.
They told Aslan they needed help because they were betrayed by the white witch.
Then they got caught by the evil wizerd.
Then they got caught by the evil wizard.
