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In my point of view, being famous has many disadvantages

FROM my point of view.. (IN my opinion)

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Imagine how funny it would be to play sports every day.

Imagine how FUN it would be to play sports every day.

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Be a famous sportsperson has many advantages.

BEING a famous sportsperson has many advantages.

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I had been addicted to this game for the last two months.

I HAVE BEEN addicted to this game for the last two months.

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In conclusion, is the most entertaining game about food.

In conclusion, IT is the most entertaining game about food.

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These characteristics make it a great game.

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I think most children like this kinds of games.

I think most children like THESE kinds of games

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I recommend this to anyone who is interested in be a football player

I recommend this to anyone who is interested in BEING a football player.

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With this game, you will get used to fly a plane.

With this game you will get used to FLYING a plane.

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I like this game as it has shorts matches

I like this game because it has SHORT matches

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Some people will make you pass a bad time with this game.

Some people will make you HAVE a bad time with this game.

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Another bad point from this game is that some people cheat.

Another bad point ABOUT this game is that some people cheat.

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Whatever your age, you can enjoy playing this game

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