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My teachers always spends her rest times to enlighten them attentively, no matter how busy she is.

My teachers always spends the rest of her time enlightening the concepts attentively no matter how busy she is. (Irene)

Some scary news, such as terroirs attack, show that campus safety have a lot of space for improvement.

Some scary news, such as terrorist attacks, shows that there is a lot of space/room for the improvement of campus safety. (Penny)

I usually save half of my salary, invest one- tenth of it, leftover is daily expenses.

I usually save half of my salary, invest one- tenth of it and spend the rest of it on daily commodities. (Sunny)

The left picture shows that when the store didn’t open yet, a large of people already stay at the store doorway.

The left picture shows that when the store wasn’t open yet, a large crowd/throng of people had already stay at the store’s doorway. (Grace)

Because no matter how hard one studies, without good health, it is like having nothing at all.

It is because…