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Whilst people are in agreement that music is essential, the text is discussed which type is the most beneficial. (Q1)
Not Ok
The first text describes that our brain can understand music ... (Q1)
Not ok
Both texts dwell upon the paramount importance of music. (Q1)
Ok
Scientists have proposed that music can have a profound effect on ... (Q1)
Ok
It is quite easy for me to define friendship, and I may do so because ... (Q2)
Ok
We had more disagreements due to vehemently opposing views. (Q2)
Not Ok - the collocation is 'vehemently opposed'.
I would like to discuss the aforementioned effects in text 1 ... (Q1)
Ok
Often, you will take a different path from your friends, as your interests diverge. (Q2)
Ok
