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THE RULE OF THE GOOD WRITING

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Choose the most effective sentence "Applicants are advised to read the job profile"

Read the Job. (Short sentence)

Read the job profile. (Short sentence)

Applicants should read the job profile

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Choose most effective sentence to change for "In order to improve our performance, we need to make a plan in advance"

We need a plan first in order to improve our performance.

To improve our performance, we need a plan.

In order to improve our performance, we should make a plan.

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The utilization of the apparatus was impeded by the malfunctioning of the components.

The malfunctioning of the components prevent the machine.

The machine did not work because the parts were broken.

The machine did not work due to the parts were broken.

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What are mistakes in this sentences "Our appointment next week needs to be rescheduled due to the fact that I have an urgent business trip on that day."

"Our appointment" and "next week "

" next week" and " due to the fact that"

" due to" and " on that day"

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Change the phrase " Will you be good enough to"

please

prefer

for

help

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What's wrong with the answer?

Unconsistency

Avoid wordiness

Use the wrong tone too sarcastic

Choose simple words

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Unnecessary information should not be included in business letters.

False

True

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What’s wrong with the email?

It is not professional

It is respectful

It is polite

It is positive and tactful

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The information is needed in connection with an application

The information is needed for an application

The information is needed to an application

The information is needed in an application

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Change the word "Purchase"

discount

do

sell

buy

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Change the phrase "In the near future"

after

soon

in the future

next time

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Choose the most effective sentence for " I have pleasure in informing you"

I am pleased to tell you ( or to say)

I am pleased to give you plenty of information

I have pleasure in giving information to you

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Choose the most effective phrase

We have recieved

We are in reciept of

We beg to acknowledge

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What does " ABC" mean in the rule " Remember ABC"

Accuracy, Brevity, Clarity

Accuracy, Breif, Clarity

Accuracy, Brief, Clear

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Guidelines for composing letters include :

All correct

Use short sentences, Choose simple words, Avoid wordiness

Use an appropriate tone, Be precise, Ensure accuracy

Check consistency, Use your initiative

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The basic tones in Business writing include:

Be positive and tactful

Be polite, not sarcastic

Be respectful

All correct

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