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Choose the most effective sentence "Applicants are advised to read the job profile"
Read the job profile. (Short sentence)
Applicants should read the job profile
Read the Job. (Short sentence)
Choose most effective sentence to change for "In order to improve our performance, we need to make a plan in advance"
In order to improve our performance, we should make a plan.
We need a plan first in order to improve our performance.
To improve our performance, we need a plan.
The utilization of the apparatus was impeded by the malfunctioning of the components.
The malfunctioning of the components prevent the machine.
The machine did not work due to the parts were broken.
The machine did not work because the parts were broken.
What are mistakes in this sentences "Our appointment next week needs to be rescheduled due to the fact that I have an urgent business trip on that day."
" next week" and " due to the fact that"
"Our appointment" and "next week "
" due to" and " on that day"
Change the phrase " Will you be good enough to"
help
for
please
prefer
What's wrong with the answer?
Avoid wordiness
Use the wrong tone too sarcastic
Choose simple words
Unconsistency
Unnecessary information should not be included in business letters.
False
True
What’s wrong with the email?
It is positive and tactful
It is polite
It is not professional
It is respectful
The information is needed in connection with an application
The information is needed in an application
The information is needed to an application
The information is needed for an application
Change the word "Purchase"
do
buy
discount
sell
Change the phrase "In the near future"
in the future
after
next time
soon
Choose the most effective sentence for " I have pleasure in informing you"
I am pleased to give you plenty of information
I am pleased to tell you ( or to say)
I have pleasure in giving information to you
Choose the most effective phrase
We beg to acknowledge
We have recieved
We are in reciept of
What does " ABC" mean in the rule " Remember ABC"
Accuracy, Breif, Clarity
Accuracy, Brevity, Clarity
Accuracy, Brief, Clear
Guidelines for composing letters include :
All correct
Check consistency, Use your initiative
Use an appropriate tone, Be precise, Ensure accuracy
Use short sentences, Choose simple words, Avoid wordiness
The basic tones in Business writing include:
Be positive and tactful
Be respectful
Be polite, not sarcastic
All correct
