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English 18 Public

Correcting common written errors in business email writing

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Well done on ________ the course!

finishing / completing / etc.

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Unfortunately, we unable to accept delaying the payment until October.

we are unable to

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Despite there are a price increase in the product, we do have a promotional package...

Despite + a/the/-ing verb = despite a/the price increase

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Is it possible to have a call on tomorrow to discuss over the issue

a call tomorrow to discuss the issue

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We can discuss further on the new pricing before you make your next order

We can discuss the new pricing further before you...

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We can’t allow a delay in payment to avoid some loan issues. (redundancy)

avoid load issues

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You are most welcome to schedule for a discussion.

schedule a discussion

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I will be inviting few more colleagues to join the meeting as well.

a few more

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Understand about your difficulty in getting paid by your customers, maybe we can discuss about this issue.

We understand your difficulty / maybe we can discuss this

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I am sorry to inform that no more delay is granted till October

inform you that

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We appreciate to have your company as our priority customer

appreciate having

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Appreciate you to convey this message to your management

I would appreciate it if you could convey

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management does not agree on delay in payment after several discussions.

on delaying / with delaying

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you may call a meeting in next week for clarification

call a meeting next week

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I am happy to schedule a meeting with you to discuss on the price change on our product.

To discuss the price change

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I am free on next Wednesday, feel free to schedule a meeting on that day to discuss on it.

free next wednesday / a meeting then / to discuss it

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