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In details, the Philippines have a significant increase ....

In detail, the Philippines had a significant increase ....

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showed a steadily number

showed a steady number

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around above 3 m

just over 3 m

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The graph shows information about how many people travelers to the Philippines.

The graph shows information about how many people traveled to the Philippines.

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Subsequently, there was a considerable to around 4 m.

Subsequently, there was a considerable rise/fall to around 4 m.

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Another interesting point is that Thailand was had more visitors than the Philippines in 2010.

Another interesting point is that Thailand had more visitors than the Philippines in 2010.

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After that it grew slightly at 4.5m.

After that it grew slightly to 4.5m.

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Then, there was gradual increase to just under 3 million until 2012.

Then, there was a gradual increase to just under 3 million until 2012.

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... over a eight-year period

... over an eight-year period

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The number of travellers to Thailand was significant decrease over the period.

The number of travellers to Thailand saw a significant decrease over the period.

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The graph shown

The graph shows

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However, how many people who travelled to Thailand begined at 3.2 m.

However, the number of people who travelled to Thailand began at 3.2 m.

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After remining stable, ...

After remaining stable, ...

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Next it plunge to 1.6m.

Next it plunged to 1.6m.

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The graph shows information about how many people traveled Thailand and the Philippines...

The graph shows information about how many people traveled to Thailand and the Philippines...

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The number of travellers to the Philippines saw a significant increased over the period.

The number of travellers to the Philippines saw a significant increase over the period.

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