People should do regular exercise. It is vital for the health of our heart.
People should do regular exercise because it is vital for the health of our heart.
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Many people feel they do not have time for regular exercise. They become unfit.
Many people feel they do not time for regular exercise. As a consequence, they become unfit.
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Fresh air can improve our blood pressure. It helps us to digest food more easily.
Fresh air can improve our blood pressure. As well as that, it helps us to digest food more easily.
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Sunlight is very beneficial. It can result in sunburn.
Sunlight is very beneficial but it can result in sunburn.
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Many people sit down in their jobs. They get little opportunity to move about.
Many people sit down in their jobs. The result of this is that they get little opportunity to move about.
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Using less technology is desirable. Its use is vital to our everyday lives.
Using less technology is desirable despite the fact that its use is vital to our everyday lives.
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WHILE/DESPITE/HOWEVER team sports are enjoyable for many people, others prefer to do sports on their own.
WHILE
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Parks provide a safe environment for children to play ALSO/TOO/AS WELL AS giving older people a place where they can meet friends and relax.
AS WELL AS
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Fashionable clothes are often extremely expensive. AS WELL/ALTHOUGH/IN ADDITION TO THIS, fashions change quickly, so people have to replace their clothes regularly.
IN ADDITION TO THIS
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Tourism can bring a lot of benefits to a place. ALTHOUGH/HOWEVER/EVEN THOUGH, it can also create problems.
HOWEVER
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DESPITE/INSTEAD/HOWEVER there being lots of interesting things to do in a city, there are also some disadvantages to living in an urban environment.
DESPITE
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I believe that students benefit greatly from having a long summer holiday. FURTHERMORE/TOO/AS WELL, teachers also need time to relax between terms.
