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  • 33 Ivy needs to add a sentence to improve the introductory paragraph of her paper. Which sentence can BEST be added after sentence 1?
    B I’m talking about the kind where an instructor tells you how to make a painting step by step.
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  • 34 Ivy needs a better transition between the second paragraph (sentences 3–8) and the third paragraph (sentences 9–11). Which phrase can she add to the beginning of sentence 9 to help with this transition?
    C As the class began
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  • 35 What is the MOST effective way to combine sentences 14 and 15?
    D I tried to cover the jagged white streak with blue paint, but to my horror it remained visible beneath the blue.
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  • 36 Ivy has included a sentence that does not belong in the sixth paragraph (sentences 23–28). Which sentence should she remove from this paragraph?
    (24) She was wearing a dress that was almost the same shade of yellow.
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  • 37 Ivy needs a better closing sentence for the last paragraph (sentences 33–36). Which sentence should replace sentence 36?
    C As imperfect as it is, that painting makes me feel happy now.
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