my parents go to work earlyin the morning.
'my' should be capitalized and 'earlyin' is two words, not one word: My parents go to work early in the morning.
They cook Breakfast for me, then they bring me to school at 7 o'clock.
"Breakfast" should not have a capital "B", it should be lowercase "b". They cook breakfast for me, then they bring me to school at 7 o'clock.
After I write my homework and after I play the video games, I usually feel hungy.
We don't need "the" before video games. And "hungy" is spelled wrong, it should be "h-u-n-g-r-y".
Sometimes, the are very tired, because she work all day.
"the" should be "they" and "she" is wrong, it should be "they"
