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Fix this: Which just goes to show how sensitive human emotions can be.
This just goes to show how sensitive human emotions can be / This shows how sensitive our emotions can be.
Fix this: We don’t need society telling us what is supposed to be normal, let people just wear what they want, talk the way they want, present how they want, and walk like they want.
We don’t need society telling us what is supposed to be normal. Let people just wear what they want, talk the way they want, and walk like they want.
Fix this: Gender norms is what most people think is an issue when it is not, it just means that others have the freedom to be who they want to be.
Gender norms are an issue for most people when it should not be. People should have the freedom to be who they want to be.
Fix this: This should not be something kids should be learning, they should be learning that people can dress how they want.
This should not be something kids learn. They should be learning that people can dress how they want.
Fix this: This article displays a message over letting people live the way they desire rather than letting it disturb others' peace. Ultimately causing harm.
This article displays a message about letting people live the way they desire, rather than causing them harm for being different.
Fix this: The way someone walks has nothing to do with you, let them walk how they want.
The way someone walks has nothing to do with you; therefore, let them walk how they want.
Fix the citation: In this article it talks about how we should define people on how they walk or how they dress when most cannot control their walk or how they feel.
In "phylosophe," Butler talks about how we should not define people on how they walk or how they feel when most cannot control these things.
Fix sentence & cite properly: The story of a man about 8 years ago with a sway in his walk since he was little, when he was growing up it became more prominent.
In "phylosophe," Butler tells the story of a man with a sway in his walk that became more prominent as he grew up.
Fix this: I agree with the author in the sense that people take this way too far, disagreeing with someone’s opinion is one thing but killing someone over it is not okay.
I agree with the author in the sense that people take this way too far: disagreeing with someone’s opinion is one thing but killing someone over it is not okay.
Fix this: This proven on the YouTube transcript made on February 23, 2007, when writer, Judith Butler, wrote about the unfortunate death of the young man from Maine is a prime example of how we as a society have bettered ourselves.
In the YouTube transcript, "phylosophe," Butler speaks about the unfortunate death of a young man from Maine.
Fix this: I think this is so ridiculous to even think about this shouldn’t be happening at all.
I think it is so ridiculous to even think about this because it shouldn’t be happening at all.
Fix this: On February 23, 2007 Judith Butler, As he shared a story about how a couple of Boys threw a boy over a bridge killing the boy because he was walking in a feminine way.
In "phylosophe," Butler shares a story about how a couple of boys threw a boy over a bridge, killing him because he was walking in a feminine way.
Fix & Cite: This boy had walked with a “swish that slowly became more pronounced” he could not help it even if he was trying i wish i did have more context to this article I would better understand but like been said he was bullied.
This boy walked with a “swish that slowly became more pronounced” and was bullied (Butler 1).
Fix the citation: Butler states, “And if someone says you must comply with the norm of masculinity, otherwise you will die (...) then we have to start to question what the relation is between complying with gender and coercion." (5)
Butler states, “ And if someone says (...) gender and coercion" (5).
