Because I think that there are still many interesting things I never experience.
It is because (that) I think there are still many interesting things (that) I've never experienced.
15
I want to know they how to after a day.
I want to know how they spend a day.
10
Our language was not same, so had difficult and talk, but I should have money at first.
Our language is not the same/ We don't share the same language, so I have difficulty communicating with them. Besides, I should save some money in advance.
20
I wish I can come true my dream.
1. I wish my dream could come true one day.
2. I wish I could carry out/realize my dream one day
25
Some people prefer to going outward to travel.
While a majority of people prefer traveling abroad, I would like to take a trip in Taiwan instead.
** prefer N/Ving to N/Ving
** prefer to Vr. rather than Vr.
20
However, they were a serious pandemic all around the world now.
However, there is a serious/severe pandemic spreading worldwide now.
5
If I am going to plan a trip by myself after I graduating. I will go to abroad.
If I am going to plan a trip by myself after graduating. I will go abroad.
10
Besides, I thinked there has more culture for us to learn.
Besides, I think (thought) there is a wide variety of cultures for us to explore.
15
Before I go to abroad, I think I should solve my English skill, because English is national language.
Before I go abroad, I think I should improve/better/polish my English skills because English is an international language.
