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Correct or incorrect? I think my project was very well
Incorrect. I think my project was very good / I think my project went very well.
Correct or incorrect? A balanced routine is essential for a good quality of life.
Correct! When using the word "essential", you can use "to" or "for" if the next part of the sentence is a noun phrase.
Correct or incorrect? Our project is about bad habits and we create a pesona with our bad habits.
Incorrect! We *created* a persona.
Correct or incorrect? We recommend our persona eat at school instead of going to the street for not arriving late
Incorrect! The sentence is hard to understand without reading once or twice. We recomment that our persona eat at school... so that he doesn't arrive late.
Correct or incorrect? We made a draw about our pesona.
Incorrect. We made a drawing of our persona.
How can you improve this sentence? I think my project was funny and interesting, I developed a new skill in being a leader and thinker, my group has a good relationship because we've known each other for a long time.
I think my project was (...). I developed a new skill (...), and my group (...).
Correct the sentence: The best team in the world is Vasco. It's the team good people cheer.
When talking about sports teams, you say that you support them; to cheer is the vocal support you give when they play.
There is one mistake here: What is it? We give good advices.
Advice is uncontable! You say advice or pieces of advice.
There is one mistake: what is it? We discovered a lot of benefits of the good sleeping routine.
We discovered a lot of benefits of a good sleeping routine (not a specific one)
There is one mistake: what is it? Firstly, we decided on what characteristics our Persona will have and how we gonna write it.
Mixing informal and formal language - gonna
Correct or incorrect? I think I can improve more my English.
I think I can improve my English more. (Subject, verb, object)
Correct or incorrect? When we started discussing our recommendations, we knew that it should be based on facts.
Correct and beautifully written!
Correct or incorrect? Firstly, everyone was confused and didn't know what topic we would use.
Correct! Very sophisticated language that is clear and to the point.
