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Some studies report that using Facebook and Twitter offer feelings of greater connectivity to others and increased self-esteem.

sample: Research shows that FB and T help people to feel more social and have more self-respect..

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There are other studies suggesting that online socializing causes insecurity and jealousy.

Some other studies offer that people feel higher levels of insecurity and jealousy when they get social online.

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Many cities are using surveillance cameras and people feel safer thanks to them.

Plenty of cities are utilizing cameras to watch the streets, which makes people feel safer.

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In some cities, surveillance cameras have helped reduce the crime rate up to fifty percent.

There are some cities where the crime rate has been decreased up to 50 pct thanks to surveillance cameras.

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For many years, scientists have known that music has many positive effects on babies.

Music has been known to have a positive influence on babies for long years.

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One powerful public policy tool that can remedy this problem is called congestion pricing

One way to solve this problem is a government regulation named congestion pricing.

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By raising the cost of using the roadways, individuals are encouraged not to drive.

If the cost of using the roadways is increased, people may stop driving as much as they usually do.

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Most people who do retire early, however, find the experience to be less satisfying for several reasons.

The majority of people who retire early do not believe that it is enjoyable for a number of reasons.

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Many people identify themselves with the jobs they perform and the amount of money they earn.

For a lot of people, the jobs they do and money they earn define them.

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Many people find it difficult to maintain friendships they developed at work after they retire.

For a lot of people, it is challenging to keep staying friends with their colleagues following their retirement.

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PASSIVE: The changes to the curriculum will affect teachers. (BY)

Teachers will be affected by the changes to the curriculum.

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The scientists observed changes in the DNA. (by)

Changes in the DNA were observed by the scientists

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PASSIVE: I will discuss Kant’s philosophical theories in this essay.

Kant's philosophical theories will be discussed in this essay.

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