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If you want to buy something from a foreign country is better the online shopping. (word order, unnecessary word). TWO ERRORS

Online shopping is better if you want to buy something from a foreign country.

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You can speak to the workers and ask for advises

You can speak to the workers and ask for advice (advice is not countable)

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the online shops usually hasn’t closing times (TWO ERRORS)

Online shops usually don't have closing times

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More and more people buy online (wrong word or missing object)

More and more people shop online. OR more and more people buy things online

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Depending in where you live 1 ERROR

Depending ON where you live

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Buying on the internet might cost expensive (TWO ERRORS)

Shopping on the internet might BE expensive

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shopping online allows consumers to browse for products and checking prices between other shops 1 ERROR

shopping online allows consumers to browse for products and CHECK prices between other shops

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In the one hand it is more fun shopping online TWO ERRORS

On the one hand shopping online is more fun

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Is better shopping in real shops REORDER

Shopping in real shops is better

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pay money to get home the package

pay money to get the package delivered (to your home)

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