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Douglas packed a lot of things in his luggage before leaving for the trip.

Fix the vague language; make it more precise

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The fluffy pink unicorn ran across the field it flew above us.

fix the run-on sentence

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The sign said there was roadwork ahead so he decided to slow down.

Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).

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"Michael just ate a hamster", Junie explained.

Fix the punctuation error. Punctuation goes INSIDE the quotation marks.

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Theodor Seuss Geisel, also known as Dr. Seuss, wrote over (60 children's books).

Fix the punctuation error.

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Since we submitted the best science project entry the teacher gave the award to Jimmy and me.

Add the missing comma.

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monster

Reset all scores!

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shark

Other team loses 20 points!

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fairy

Take points!

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banana

Go to last place!

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Since Stewart lost his lucky hat during the storm and bought a new one yesterday.

Remove the unnecessary word.

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Facing his greatest fear.

fix the sentence fragment

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banana

Go to last place!

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rocket

Go to first place!

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fairy

Take points!

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thief

Give points!

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The hummingbird's wings blurred while it eagerly sips the sugar water from the feeder.

Fix the verb tense consistency error.

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Charlie and Rhonda purchased the home theyselves.

Fix the pronoun error (theyselves --> themselves).

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Felicia borrowed the book but she forgot to return it.

Add a comma before the connector word (compound sentence).

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Henry walked to the park and sits on the bench next to his favorite chipmunk.

Fix the verb tense consistency error.

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lifesaver

Give 20 points!

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gift

Win 20 points!

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gift

Win 15 points!

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thief

Give points!

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banana

Go to last place!

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gift

Win 15 points!

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shark

Other team loses 25 points!

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lifesaver

Give 15 points!

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