1. The peril on the road is shown when there is a 'rocky outcrop', with its guttural alliteration affirming its ominous nature
when = through the phrase ; choice of phrase, need to be more explicit between link with alliteration and being ominous
2. The writer's hopes of finding gold being " swept away by the currrent" strengthens this connection even more, this time all but directly referring to the movement of the water in the river.
comma splice
3. The writer uses a lasting effect of mystery and danger by using vivid, visual imagery, metaphors and personification.
Too general and too vague
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