Apart from this, my tour guide: Jack was unpromising and unconvincing, providing unhelpful advice using words such as ‘rarely’ or ‘unlikely’.
EBI: wrong use of 'Apart from' and incorrect HLP and WW: unpromising
Needless to say, being only equipped with a torch, broom and ball of twine while searching for a dangerous predator in the dead of night in the wild, is not only highly irresponsible but also incredibly negligent of safety protocols.
WWW: great detail and concision
Of the myriad of issues I encountered on your company’s night-time expedition, safety infringements are naturally of the greatest concern.
WWW: great voice and high-level vocabulary
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