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"On the one hand, the education is a fundamental factor, since the quality of it is higher in the city." Mistake?
"On the one hand, education..." (not "the education")
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"Thus, big cities allow youth to course, for instance, film or dance studies." What's the mistake? Can you suggest a correction?
We don't have a verb "to course". "To pursue" would be the best substitute here.
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"One of the hottest issues nowadays is the preference of the young people to live in cities rather than.." Mistake?
"Hottest issues" is very informal - better to say "controversial issues".
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"On the other hand, the big majority of parents believe that cities are much more developed.." Mistake?
"The big majority" -> "A large majority" or "An overwhelming majority"
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"Moreover, the education in the villages is limited, not everybody has the possibility to assist to the school." Mistake?
"Not everybody has the possibility of ATTENDING school"
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"Really" is formal enough for essays - true or false?
False - really is VERY informal.
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"In addition, when people is young they tend to want to start working" Mistake?
people ARE
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"To sum up, the lifestyle of young people is to be citizens of an urban place, but in a future..." Mistake?
In THE future.
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"The first factor that influence to the decision to live in a city." Mistake?
"Influences to". Correction: "the first factor that influences the decision...."
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"The first topic I will consider is job opportunities." Mistake?
"Topic" is not the best choice when evaluating causes - use the word "factor".
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"Having an economic stability is the most important thing that young people value" Mistake?
"Having an economic stability" -> "Having economic stability"
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"By contrast, cities are more numerous and has more jobs, so it is easier to get an interview."
"cities.....HAVE more jobs".
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