She asked, “Will you still be my friend?” / She asked, “Will you still be my friend"?

Jill asked, "Did mom say that she was going to pick us up"? Jill asked, / "Did mom say that she was going to pick us up?"

I want it right now! "she demanded angrily." / "I want it right now!" she demanded angrily.

"She said" she didn't feel well. / She said she didn't feel well.

"hi, Jim, yelled Mark."/ "Hi, Jim," yelled Mark.

"Do you want it now?" I asked. / "Do you want it now? I asked."

Mary looked at us and shouted "Take those wet shoes off!”/ Mary looked at us and shouted, "Take those wet shoes off!"

Correct or Incorrect? "I am so thrilled to be here! he shouted."

"Yes, I will attend" the charity event, "she replied." / "Yes, I will attend the charity event," she replied.

Macy said, "Pizza is my favorite food./ " Macy said, "pizza is my favorite food.".

"Quotation marks make sense now!" he exclaimed. / Quotation marks make sense now! He exclaimed. / Quotation marks make sense now! He exclaimed.

The song asks, “Would you like to swing on a star?” / The song asks, “Would you like to swing on a star”?

I don't feel well, she said. / "I don't feel well," she said.