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The results appear to support the view that sustainability is an important purchasing factor for Generation Z consumers
Appropiate – appear to to signal interpretation rather than certainty, and it avoids emotive or evaluative words. The tone is analytical and formal.
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I would love to study abroad, but unfortunately, the costs are too high for me.
Inappropriate. Too personal.
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When there is so much sickening poverty in the world, it's incredibly unfair that some people live in luxury.
Inappropriate. Too emotional (sickening poverty) too informal (super angry)
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Prices continue to go up due to inflation
inappropriate - use of phrasal verb
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boom
Lose 50 points!
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shark
Other team loses 25 points!
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rocket
Go to first place!
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banana
Go to last place!
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Unemployment is a difficult subject for me to write about as I have never been unemployed. Apart from when I was 18 and living with my parents.....
Inappropriate. Pointless personal information.
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Survey results show that influencer marketing is becoming an increasingly effective strategy for reaching younger consumers.
APPROPRIATE – It uses the neutral reporting verb show, includes a cautious phrase is becoming, and replaces emotional or absolute phrasing
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lifesaver
Give 25 points!
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star
Double points!
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shark
Other team loses 25 points!
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baam
Lose 10 points!
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monster
Reset all scores!
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magnet
Take 5 points!
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gift
Win 15 points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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seesaw
Swap points!
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gift
Win 15 points!
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fairy
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banana
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The findings suggest that social media use may be linked to higher levels of anxiety among young adults.
APPROPRIATE – It uses suggest and may to hedge the claim, avoids emotional language (“causes anxiety”), and maintains an objective, impersonal tone
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All things considered, English appears to be far easier to learn than German.
Appropriate
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Many of my friends go to the gym or workout quite frequently.
Inappropriate. Too personal. refer to society, not your friends.
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There is no point having loads of violence in films and anyways, explicitly violent films are boring too.
Not appropriate. 'anyways, too'. Poor sentence structure.
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Many people would agree that being a parent can be mundane, stressful and challenging at times. Nevertheless, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
Appropriate
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Tourism is a big industry. In some ways that is good. In other ways that is bad.
Inappropriate. Too simple
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