Are you a busy student? Do you struggle to keep fit and eat healthily? Donโt worry! I am going to tell you exactly what you should do. Keep on reading, you will thank me later!
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Correct it: Many students are unable to find work, despite they obtained their university degrees.
Many students are unable to find work, despite obtaining their university degrees. (Be careful with the verbs - gerund vs. infinitive, subject-verb agreement)
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Essay (organization): On .........., it is a useful tool, but on ........, its everyday use can develop into a serious addiction.
the one hand, the other hand
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Lastly, can I ask you about the duration of the camp? I look forward to hearing from you.
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Correct it: 'Some of the courses they offer are cooking, first aid, survival skills...'
'Some of the courses they offer are cooking, first aid AND/OR survival skills.' (Please never use '...' in ANY writing!)
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Correct it: The impacts of that different types of technology are rarely considered.
The impacts of THESE/THOSE different types of technology are rarely considered. (Be careful with THIS, THAT, THESE and THOSE.)
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Article (involving the reader): Have you ............ so excited that you almost starting dancing?
ever been
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A review: The ............ character is played by Tom Hanks.
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Nevertheless, Hilton's Eatery offers delicious meals in an unbeatable atmosphere, so you should definitely give it a try. I promise you wonโt regret it!
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Essay (opinions, opening): It is often ........... that schools should be more responsible for teaching about health.
said, believed, claimed, argued
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Anyway, I must dash now. Get in touch soon and let me know what you think.
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Essay (organization): Many people agree that university is the only option after graduating from school. ..........., I believe there exist other options as well.