Lastly, can I ask you about the duration of the camp? I look forward to hearing from you.
FORMAL E-MAIL
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Essay (organization): Many people agree that university is the only option after graduating from school. ..........., I believe there exist other options as well.
However, Nevertheless, Contrastingly
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Essay (organization): Fast food may be unhealthy, but it is so much more convenient for busy people. .........., it is quite affordable.
Moreover, Futhermore, Additionally
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
thief
Give points!
5
10
15
20
25
gift
Win 25 points!
Okay!
fairy
Take points!
5
10
15
20
25
baam
Lose 10 points!
Oops!
15
A review: The ............ character is played by Tom Hanks.
main
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
seesaw
Swap points!
Oops!
magnet
Take 25 points!
Okay!
fairy
Take points!
5
10
15
20
25
banana
Go to last place!
Oops!
15
Article (involving the reader): Did you .............. that more than 50% of the population are more afraid of public speaking than of death?
know
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Correct it: Many students are unable to find work, despite they obtained their university degrees.
Many students are unable to find work, despite obtaining their university degrees. (Be careful with the verbs - gerund vs. infinitive, subject-verb agreement)
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Article (expressing attitude, linker): We polled over 20 students regarding homework and .........., the majority claim that it is pointless.
unsurprisingly, not surprisingly
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Article (involving the reader): Have you ............ so excited that you almost starting dancing?
ever been
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Correct it: The impacts of that different types of technology are rarely considered.
The impacts of THESE/THOSE different types of technology are rarely considered. (Be careful with THIS, THAT, THESE and THOSE.)
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
To sum up, I would say that honesty and keeping in touch are very good ways of supporting your friends.
ESSAY
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
15
Essay (organization): On .........., it is a useful tool, but on ........, its everyday use can develop into a serious addiction.
the one hand, the other hand
Oops!
Check
Okay!
Check
thief
Give points!
5
10
15
20
25
fairy
Take points!
5
10
15
20
25
gift
Win 20 points!
Okay!
thief
Give points!
5
10
15
20
25
15
Anyway, I must dash now. Get in touch soon and let me know what you think.