I specially loved the view of the streets covered by leafs (2 mistakes).
I especially loved the view of the streets covered by leaves.
Even tho I've spent mostly great time, I want the bad times to be remembered as well (2 mistakes).
Even though I've spent mostly great times, I want the bad times to be remembered as well (2 mistakes).
I denied to swim and I thinked I would blamed him (3 mistakes).
I refused to swim and I thought I would blame him.
The sun made me feel powerful to make new friends and make up with those I didn't got along with (1 mistake).
The sun made me feel powerful to make new friends and make up with those I didn't get along with.
It was a bit cold but enough warm to wear a jumper (1 mistake).
It was a bit cold but warm enough to wear a jumper (1 mistake).
I remember that days when we were a family and we spend that evenings at the beach (3 mistakes).
I remember those days when we were a family and we used to spend the evenings at the beach (3 mistakes).
My cousins house it's a small villa next to the sea (2 mistakes).
My cousins' house is a small villa next to the sea.
Everyone has a place which they consider it home (1 mistake).
Everyone has a place which they consider home.
This is how it would be a single afternoon with my group of friends (rephrase).
This is what a typical afternoon with my group of friends would be like..
The bench were I spent many time with my best friend (2 mistakes).
The bench where I spent a lot of time with my best friend.
Wake up at a snowy winter is one of my favourites feelings (3 mistakes).
Waking up on a snowy winter is one of my favourite feelings.
For exemple, my dad was painting the walls and he droped all the paint and made a big messy (3 mistakes):
For example, my dad was painting the walls and he dropped all the paint and made a big mess.
All seasons are unique and diferent, but winter it's one of the most especial ones (3 mistakes).
All seasons are unique and different, but winter is one of the most special ones.
I may be a bit baised towards spring as it was when I was born (1 mistake).
I may be a bit biased towards spring as it was when I was born.
Nowaday, every place that I go has some tipe of violence (3 mistakes).
Nowadays, every place (where) I go has some type of violence.
They were confortable and had always thousands of dolls on it (3 mistakes).
They were comfortable and always had thousands of dolls on them.