MISTAKES IN AN EBAU WRITING
We use our phones to call people that we appreciate, check on our school work, have some breaks...
We use our phones to call people that we appreciate, check on our school work, have some breaks AND SO ON / AND SO FORTH / (,ETC.)
Famous people are icons who make a contribuition to the society
Famous people are icons who make a CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY
The first reason we admire famous people it's because of their amount of money.
The first reason we admire famous people IS because of their amount of money.