Show, Not Tell
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Telling: “She was scared.”
Example: Her hands trembled as the shadows moved across the room.
Telling: “Lily was happy.”
Example: Lily jumped up and down, clapping her hands with a wide grin.
Telling: “The boy was angry.”
Example: His fists clenched, and his face turned red as he shouted at the broken toy.
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