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  • Тема: My Favorite Food Тезис: I think pizza is the best.
    Использование первого лица ("I think") и слишком общее утверждение.
  • Тема: The Best Pet Тезис: Dogs and cats are both great pets because they are friendly.
    Проблема: Попытка охватить две темы сразу (собаки и кошки).
  • Тема: My Favorite Season Тезис: I like summer and winter because they are fun.
    Попытка охватить две темы сразу (лето и зима).
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