Before Harry Potter, J.K. struggled to make ends meet. Now she has a fortune of 1 billion dollars.
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I've just finished reading Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. It's a book with 831 pages, but I just couldn't put it down.
...It's a 831-page book, but I just couldn't put it down.
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The movie Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets lasts 3 hours. It's really gripping, though.
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets is a 3-hour movie...
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Her American publishers are located in a beautiful building with 9 stories (=floors) in Manhattan. It takes only 5 minutes to walk to Greenwich Village from there.
Her American publishers are located in a 9-story building in Manhattan. It's a 5-minute walk to Greenwich Village from there.
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Before Harry Potter, J.K. lived in a small apartment. Now, she has a mansion with 8 rooms in Scotland and a house in Kensington, London.
...Now, she has an 8-room mansion in Scotland...
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J.K. got an advance of 1,500 pounds to write her first book.
J.K. got a 1,500-pound advance to write her first book.
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The author, who is 45 years old, had a difficult start to her writing career.
The 45-year-old author had a difficult start to her writing career.