Can you spot the mistake? In general, the students don't care about their teachers.
Don't use THE when talking about things in general.
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Punctuation? I am afraid of large birds, spiders and mom.
Use a comma before and when adding three items or more.
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Can you spot the mistake? Teachers in my school are awesome!
The teachers* We use "the" when talking about a specific group.
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Have twenty-two students in this class.
There are twenty-two students.
We commonly used there is/are to express existence.
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Punctuation? He is not really nice looking and yet he has enormous charm
He is not really nice-looking, and yet he has enormous charm.
Use a comma before any coordinating conjunction connecting two independent clauses.
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I haven't ate anything today.
I have not eaten anything today.
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Everyone have seen that movie.
Everyone has seen that movie.
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seesaw
Swap points!
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star
Double points!
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gift
Win 25 points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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heart
Other team wins 25 points!
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gift
Win 10 points!
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rocket
Go to first place!
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lifesaver
Give 20 points!
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How can it be improved? IBGE is an important institution.
IBGE, the Brazilian Institute of Geography and Statistics, is an important institution.
Don't take for granted that your readers know things.
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It is raining when I got home last night.
It was raining when I got home last night.
* Use past progressive for a longer action that was interrupted by a shorter action in the past.
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My father is thinking that I should stop smoking.
My father thinks I should stop smoking.
* In this sentence, the verb think is a state verb. It is generally not used in the progressive (~ing) tense.
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Punctuation? I want a pizza and a hot-dog.
You don't need commas if "and" is used to indicate addition.
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eraser
Reset score!
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shark
Other team loses 15 points!
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shark
Other team loses 25 points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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I fell asleep while I watched TV.
I fell asleep while I was watching TV.
*After while use past progressive.
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If I am a child, I would play outside.
If I were a child, I would play outside.
* Second conditional = If + past tense, subject + would/could/might. The second conditional is used for unreal cases.