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One major advantage of tourism are to make those countries more famous.
One major advantage of tourism is to make those countries more famous.
For example, Angkor wat temple is the most popular and beauties.
For example, Angkor wat temple is the most popular and beautiful.
it is really important to protect nature.
It is really important to protect nature.
For instance, people can not visit the country without spending money.
For instance, people cannot visit the country without spending money.
Tourism brings in money and increases job opportunity,
Tourism brings in money and increases job opportunities.
Advantages and disadvantages of tourism in Cambodia.
There are advantages and disadvantages of tourism in Cambodia.
Tourism attracts millions of people to see many different places in Cambodia. But, it can affect the country.
Tourism attracts millions of people to see many different places in Cambodia, but it can affect the country.
There are many visitors want to travel to Cambodia.
There are many visitors who/that want to travel to Cambodia.
Tourism is important because it create jobs.
Tourism is important because it creates jobs.
Firstly, more crimes.
depend on students' answers.
When lots of tourist visit Cambodia, a lot of people will be employed because a lot of tourists visit our country.
Overuse of the word " a lot of". Depending on students' answers.
Their will share their calture with local people. (TWO mistakes)
They will share their culture with local people.
Even though it has some disadvantages, but it has some positive points.
Even though or but
