While I was reading the article, I realised that while spending a lot of money on healthcare is probably a good idea, it doesnยดt necessarily lead to the best results. (furthermore, even though)
While I was ..., I realised that even though spending a lot of money on healthcare is probably a good idea, it doesnยดt necessarily lead to the best results.
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The Cubans emphasise prevention of illness. In contrast, the Americans emphasise treatment of illness. (as a result, whereas)
The Cubans emphasise prevention of illness whereas the Americans emphasise treatment of illness.
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Cuba is a relatively poor country. Consequently, it makes sense for its government to focus on prevention as this is cheaper. (although, since)
Since Cuba is a relatively poor country, it makes sense for its government to focus on prevention as this is cheaper.
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If the government doesnยดt improve healthcare, people will continue to die unnecessarily and the current approach is also a waste of money. (furthermore, otherwise)
If the government doesnยดt improve healthcare, people will continue to die unnecessarily. Furthermore, the current approach is also a waste of money.
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Although the Americans spend the most on healthcare, they donยดt have the worldยดs best system. (even so, whereas)
The Americans spend the most on healthcare. Even so, they donยดt have the worldยดs best system.